Thursday, July 30, 2009
That Damn Fridge
Today's muse: Protagonize
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That Damn Fridge
It mocks me
A sentry in the kitchen
Its brilliant whiteness glittering fiercely
Taunting me with its mouth-watering sins
Be gone with you!
Oh, vixen of pastries
Temptress of sweets
Harlot of calories
You seductively call my name
Like a lover’s caress
Luring me closer
Until I succumb
I am your slave!
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7 comments:
LoL! I wish I could favorite this on Blogger. I've never encountered a poetic love affair such as this.
"Be gone with you!
Oh, vixen of pastries
Temptress of sweets
Harlot of calories"
Love this! A very creative word play!
I also love the above lines. You have such a humorous and witty flare that I admire. I love witty writing, especially poetry. it takes great talent to be funny.
I had a lot of fun writing this poem. I've mentioned on other blogs that I've been having nightmares and it's affected my writing. I think it also has something to do with the pen name. When I put on my Monica hat (or perhaps it's a jaunty bonnet) I assume a different persona and my writing becomes quite dark. I'm hoping the last couple of posts have broken the cycle!
My thanks to everyone who is following. I really appreciate your comments!
"Mouth watering sins"...so aptly put. I can relate, hence the big ga-dunka dunk I sit on as I write this....
This is a fun one! Love the Harlot of Calories line! So true :)
i hope to read everything on your blog one of these days.
How do you do it? If I didn't have control, I would be jealous,, lol,, funtime!!
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